It's not that it's bad. The pad in the background sounds nice.
But the beat is really cut and paste. The first sign of an uninspired song is over half of it having the bass on every beat. Kinda boring. And the hat did not diversify enough.
I as well did not find the beep to be the best choice for the instrument for the melody. It was okay, though.
And overall, I like the mix. Not bad for that.
Keep at it.
Thank you for the tips! I'll try to use these to enhance my music in the future.
Some good ideas but VERY sloppy transitions from part to part. And you layered some tracks without having them in time. Build the song piece by piece and pay attention to detail the first time through and you should be ok. And the mix isn't very good at some points. Jumps in volume for no reason from instrument to instrument.
Keep at it. Potential, I see.
aright ill keep that in mind thnx
the guitar sounds too...smokey. which may be what you were goin for, but it either needed to be more crisp or more cloudy sounding. u shoulda synthed the sound of the guitar a bit, probably. i did like the snare drum though. sounded pretty nice, but probably only cause i play percussion. all together, not bad, but sounded like a semi-failed attempt at making a piece for the original half life soundtrack.
Hmm, I don't see how it relates to Halflife at all.. but I'll take your word on it. The guitar sounds too smokey... did you read the title of the song? Glad you liked the precussion!
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